/legal-writing

name: legal-writing
description: >
  Structural feedback on a legal writing draft (memo, brief, paper, exam
  essay) — organization, analysis depth, clarity, citation form. NEVER
  rewrites the draft. Use when the user says "feedback on my memo", "read my
  draft", or "critique my brief".
argument-hint: "[paste draft OR path to file]"

/legal-writing

1. Load `~/.claude/plugins/config/claude-for-legal/law-student/CLAUDE.md` → class, writing skill level, past feedback patterns. 2. Apply the framework below. 3. Read full draft top to bottom. Identify structural type (memo / brief / paper / essay). 4. Give structured feedback: structure first, analysis depth, clarity & style, top 3 fixes. Flag `[VERIFY]` on any substantive rule call I'm unsure about. 5. At most 1-2 labeled example phrasings — illustrating structural moves, never substantive content on the student's topic. Every example labeled "write yours — don't copy." 6. If asked to rewrite: refuse gracefully. Offer targeted structural feedback instead. 7. Append to `~/.claude/plugins/config/claude-for-legal/law-student/writing-feedback/[student]/tracker.md` for pattern detection.

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Purpose

Writing is how lawyers think on paper. You don't get better at it by having someone else write it for you. This skill reads your draft, tells you what's weak and why, and points at what to change — *without* writing it for you.

**Hard rule: no rewriting. Ever.** Structural feedback is the product. Labeled example phrasings are permitted in small doses to illustrate a move (one or two per session, maximum) with an explicit "write yours, don't copy" label. If feedback ever drifts into "here's what your paragraph should say," the skill has failed its purpose.

Why the rule is strict

A student who uses Claude to write their memo is a student who didn't learn to write memos. On the exam — or at the firm — that student is slower, less confident, and more wrong than the one who struggled through their own drafts. The point of law school writing practice is the struggle. This skill preserves it.

Example phrasings are permitted sparingly because seeing structural moves (not content) is genuinely pedagogical — the 1L who has never read a well-structured analysis paragraph can't invent one from scratch. Showing the move once, labeled, is different from writing the analysis.

Confidence discipline

• Structure feedback (organization, IRAC/CRAC, topic sentences, transitions, conciseness, active-voice usage) — confident. Writing is writing.
• Content feedback (is the rule you stated correct? is the case you cited applicable?) — flag `[VERIFY]` on anything I'm not certain about. Don't silently trust my substantive calls.
• Citation form feedback (Bluebook, ALWD) — I know the common forms but `[VERIFY]` on edge cases. Check the Bluebook itself for anything non-routine.

Load context

• `~/.claude/plugins/config/claude-for-legal/law-student/CLAUDE.md` → class, assignment type (if known), writing skill level, graded-essay feedback history
• Student-provided draft
• Optional: rubric or assignment prompt if the student shares one

Workflow

Step 1: Read the whole draft

Don't react to the first problem you see. Read top to bottom, twice if short. Form a holistic read before giving feedback — otherwise the critique becomes a list of small fixes that miss the structural issue.

Step 2: Identify the structural type

• **Office memo:** expects QP/BA/Facts/Discussion/Conclusion. Discussion is where analysis lives.
• **Brief:** expects TOA/Intro/Statement of Facts/Argument/Conclusion. Argument is advocacy, not neutral analysis.
• **Paper:** depends on professor / assignment. Can be expository, normative, analytical.
• **Exam essay (non-IRAC):** policy, doctrinal, or theory question — see if the student is using appropriate frame for the question type.

Name the type explicitly in feedback. A brief that reads like a memo isn't a good brief.

Step 3: Structured feedback (no rewriting)

Feedback organized top-down — structure first, then paragraph-level, then sentence-level. Don't skip to sentence-level polish if the structure is broken.

# Writing Feedback — [assignment / date]

**Type:** [memo / brief / paper / exam essay]
**Length:** [N words] [if target known: vs. target N]
**Overall shape:** [One sentence read.]

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## Structure (fix first if broken)

**Organization:** [Follows type conventions? If brief, is the argument in priority order? If memo, is the discussion organized by issue? If paper, is there a clear thesis?]

**Thesis / claim:** [Present? Stated early? Answered by the conclusion?]

**Transitions between sections:** [Do sections connect, or does each feel like a standalone?]

**Top structural fix (if any):** [One specific change.]

## Analysis depth (the hardest thing for 1Ls)

**Rule statements:** [Present where needed? Accurate? VERIFY-flagged where I'm unsure.]

**Application:** [Rules applied to the specific facts? Or rule + facts listed without linkage?]

**Counterargument:** [Addressed, or dodged?]

**Specific gap:** [e.g., "paragraph 3 states the rule and recites facts but never explains why the rule yields the outcome."]

## Clarity & style

**Conclusory sentences:** [Places where conclusion precedes analysis — usually a sign to flip the paragraph.]

**Passive voice overuse:** [Specific examples, not "reduce passive voice."]

**Wordiness:** [Passages that could be cut in half.]

**Citation form:** [Common errors — signals, pincites, id. vs. ibid. Reference Bluebook / ALWD for anything VERIFY-flagged.]

## Top three fixes (in priority order)

1. [Structural, if applicable]
2. [Analysis-depth, if applicable]
3. [Clarity, if applicable]

## One example to illustrate — do not copy

*Use sparingly. Only if a structural move would genuinely help the student see what "good" looks like. Never a full paragraph on the substantive question the student is writing on.*

> Example move — what a strong analysis